Changing

A Poem by JessicaPaigeB

What I strive for

Is so far from what I am.

Miles away from who I want to be.

© 2011 JessicaPaigeB

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Seshat Nidaba

Oh I'm surprised, I didn't expect a haiku, I like.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Priscilla Sayers

Love that. No mish mosh of words to get to a very solid point. Great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Antonio Valentino

Oh gosh, change usually doesn't come too easily does it... this sounds feelings inside a blender... mixed emotions

A lot to think about in such a short piece... i love that... my poems are longer then sin and don't make half as much sense... :))

Really enjoyed, thanks for share
Antonio :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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roy mccarthy

almost like a haiku!
but it says whats needed too in a poetic way!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Personne

That's such an odd thing to write. It just boggles my mind, but in a good way. Why would someone strive for something that will not fit them? Why want something that is not truly who you are? Very nice poem. It's clever.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on October 4, 2011
Last Updated on October 4, 2011

Author

JessicaPaigeB

Dearborn Heights/ Detroit, MI

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I am 18, currently studying at a community college; I have not picked a major yet. Meeting people is my favorite thing to do, and I love to just experience life. I write because I like to tell my stor.. more..