As-Salamu Alaykum

As-Salamu Alaykum

A Poem by ms. understood

What drew me into you
Was a warmth so enticing
Everyone in the room wanted to befriend you
Except for me
I needed to know the gentle caress of your hands on my skin
What it felt like to hold your hand walking down the street
Dinners shared on late nights
Conversations on the reasons why you wake up everyday
And what you think about on a lonely drive home
All this leading to questions like why you chose me to spend that night with
And every other night after that
Giving you the most vulnerable pieces of me had never been so easy before
Mind. Body. & Soul.
A connection one rarely comes across in any lifetime
And now I know
If you leave
When you leave
I won't ever recover
Nor will I want to
Because I never want to forget 
How much it hurts to love you

© 2020 ms. understood


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This poem captures the essence of vulnerability and the courage it takes to love, with no guarantee it will be returned or last forever. I applaud those who can put themselves out there, and risk everything (especially enduring pain) for just one genuine love. I suppose the pain has a good purpose. It prevents us (or tries) from making the same mistake again. But, the risk is always we might miss true love. A remarkably good poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Leo
Peace be upon you as well. A fresh and original romantic poem that well articulated your emotions and thoughts. It was also a nice microscope of how women can think or feel at times. Very interesting. Salam and be blessed. (check out the romantic poems I got when you have the time :))

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on February 16, 2020
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