Late Night Lover

Claw marks ingrained into my backside

Savory flavors between the hips

Sweet ecstasy in our twisted tongues

Intoxicated nights spent amongst the stars

Enlighten yourself between these sheets, darling

Let me teach you all the ways 

In which you can please a woman of my significance

And you shall earn a round of applause 

After you've been drenched in my temporary love for you

 

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A frenetic offering by a woman in charge of her needs and wants writen in a short form that encapsulates that emotion succinctly.

[SkinlessFrank]

I once had a temporary lover...we ripped each other to pieces...that kind of love is not meant to be borne for long

[Kaede16]

I love the sensuality that this poem emanates. You present yourself as a goddess. A being worthy of everything the world has to offer. Beautifully penned Ms.

[Paul Bell]

I suppose if he goes away happy all is good, though I've got a feeling he doesn't know about the temporary love agreement. Actually I don't even think he knows about the silent applause. Sort of grinning in a weird way here.

[ms. understood]

I am not sure what he knows either. Probably better off that way. Thank you for the review!

[R.E. Ray]

Perhaps two "late night lovers" who know the meaning of caveat emptor. The confidence of the late night lover has its own appeal, even without the sensual images. And, a temporary love is not such a bad thing in those "drenched" moments.

[ms. understood]

Temporary moments of passion are always welcome to free the mind. Thank you for the review!

[Robert Trakofler]

Tho the throws can be intense at the satisfy she may dispense LOL

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and yet the last five words..temporary---become engaged in the activity with me, but don't let your heart engage, I will only break it...it's like writing a poem on the sheets...once it's written, it is on to the next one.
j.

[ms. understood]

You definitely understand where I am coming from! Thank you!

[Chris]

Dreams to live by... and within.

[John the Baptist]

No man could resist such an invitation.

[ms. understood]

I certainly could not resist my temptations either....

[Relic]

I think I'd be sad if love like that was only temporary. A hot one from you Ms. :))))

[ms. understood]

trust me, I am sad....thank you for the support!!