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Back To Where It Started

A Poem by ms. understood

I miss those cold days in January 
When you would come over and we would watch satirical comedy shows
You would look at me whenever something funny happened
To make sure I was laughing and enjoying myself
I could feel your stare 
And your laughter echoed through my soul
It was the purest and simplest moments
That I enjoyed the most
They meant everything to me
Come find me laying on my futon
Reminiscing of those days 
I'll be waiting

© 2019 ms. understood


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afraid not....those moments are gone forever and into the reveries we grasp at during those moments before we drift off

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful poem. Cherish those wonderful memories.

Posted 5 Years Ago


This piece stands out in its sheer simplicity. Good read

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ms. understood

5 Years Ago

Thank you for the support!
A nicely written poem. Reminds me of the simple pleasures of love.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ms. understood

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the support!
i wonder if we did what the speaker did in this poem, an old love might just come back....if that person is reminiscing the same way...
I could think of a couple people i wouldn't mind imagining into being right there again.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ms. understood

5 Years Ago

I wish he would come back....
Some lazy days have the best moments . For everyone is relaxed! Nice writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ms. understood

5 Years Ago

Those are the moments I miss the most. Thanks for the support!
All the fun and contentment as well as excitement of a new relationship. Enjoying each others company. No better way to spend time. Simplicity with contentment. Nicely penned.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ms. understood

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
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Vin
Keep going! The way you meddle with the words is quite mesmerizing. Looking forward for more

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ms. understood

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Vin!
Vin

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. Keep enriching

Vin ( https://vinajith.blogspot.com/ )
Simple and extremely relateable (unfortunately).

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ms. understood

5 Years Ago

Very unfortunate. Thanks for the support!

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Discovering a new version of myself through poetry. If you have any books, movies, art, etc that you care to share please message me. I am always looking for something new that keeps me creative. more..

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