Saudade

I long for your kisses in the dead of night

A thirst for your tongue wrapped around mine

Sharing my sweet delicacies 

With the one that got away

You melted me like a candle

My heart set a flame by your laughter

And suffered at the presence of your absence

I could no longer feel the heat between our spark

I floated to the ether and got lost

Now that I have arrived at this unbearable silence

I regret letting you walk away

I'm sorry I couldn't join you in loving me

Saudade

Reviews

[Relic]

That spark needs lots of work to keep burning. Fatigue is nothing new and understandable.

~ Nice one, Ms. ~

[ms. understood]

Thank you!!

[MarkAndTheOcean]

Very erotic and steamy little poem ! Also I love the bittersweet side to it mixed with the erotic elements, something I like to do once in awhile in my work.
I would love to see you tackle a longer poem or a short story with these themes, keep it up :)