My Angel

You took my breath away

A gust of wind

My heart is a fan on high speed

Blowing feathers in the air

So hard to speak

Without you besides me

A fallen angel

With no one to lift me 

Heavenly father

End this suffering

I will join you wherever you are

Come back to me

Forever again

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Great visuals here and the repetition works well in this short romantic write. Nicely done.

Chris

[Aurora]

A plaintive and romantic write

[MarkAndTheOcean]

A very lovely and very sad little poem. I liked how the person in this poem sounds like they have a great longing for someone, almost like a desperate wish :)

[ms. understood]

Mark, I am so glad you understood the message. Thank you for the support!!

[MarkAndTheOcean]

Hey no prob !! I look forward to reading more of your stuff, Thinker. Keep it up !!!