Work

Work work work

All we do is work

We work just to work

We work because we need to

We work because we have to

All we do is work

But when we need to work at the most important thing...

Our relationship

We seem to not have time for it

Work work work

That's all we do

Well its time to work for something for us

Before we lose what we have worked so hard to achieve

Reviews

[Norah]

I'm sorry but this made me laugh and I liked it lol!

[sid......]

really good!

[Cassie]

Love it

[Shiningwolf]

SOOOO TRUE!! You nailed it in my case :( lol

[kickstart gal]

The repetition is a nice touch. I think the point you're making is spot-on -- it's so easy to get caught up in "busy work" instead of working on what really matters. Slow down your pace a little as you write, and I think some of your lines will come out stronger.

Nice to see a fellow North Carolinian here!