When I'm with you...

about my realtionship and how i feel right now with it

When I'm with you nobody knows just how I feel,

well I will tell you how I feel.

When I'm with you I feel like nobody can touch me,

I feel like I'm Ten feet tall and bullet proof.

When I am with you all I want is to be with you,

and nobody, not even my parents can take that away from me.

When I am with you all I want is for you to tell me that you love me,

just so I know you feel the same way as me.

When I am with you I love the fact that we don't fight like the rest of the couples...

But when i am away from you I feel like our relationship is about to end because we can not be what we want.

Now you know just how I feel,

will you fight with me,

our will this be the end of me being with you?

Author's Note

This is a poem of my love for someone who can't love me back because of his past...

Reviews

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Its a poem of passion and love with a hint of confusion,like your not sure how its going to end!bt i hope he sees wot he's missing out on when he isnt with you!

[KalebG (Cry Faux)]

I experienced the same fate as you did, it is not fair that what is has to be, But i believe things happen for a true reason. The poem show the passion and love of how one feels for another and how perfect things are, but in mind it is only just a dream that cannot become a reailty. This is what hurts the most.

[Shiningwolf]

Wonderful...this is true for some people. It is for me anyways.