This is one of those works that everyone would enjoy reading regardless of their taste in poetry and many would relate to it. It's a wonderful and a very true piece. I really like your choice of words and the way you write too. So, well done and keep on writing.
I liked this poem. We all need to go to that quiet place sometimes. For me, it's a hot, sandy beach in the Philippines. Think I'll go there now. Good work.
This is me all the time. I can't count the number of times someone has asked me what was wrong when it was in fact nothing. Sometimes they ask me why I look sad, and I say, "That's just my face." Happens all the time because I suffer from RBF.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I know the feeling, the 'that's just my face' feeling...im not upset I swear people...;)
Yep, I so understand this Jesse. I stopped looking in the mirror before I went out, as just the thought of going out seems to be enough to morph me into resting b***h face mode. (Can guys get resting b***h face? I think so, as some of the biggest b*****s seem to be male)
People see someone being quiet and think the worst, ready for some juicy gossip. It's always a let down that the gossip ain't forthcoming. They always seem to think I am being sarcastic when I say I'm fine, Moi? Sarcastic? Never. While they think I'm being sarcastic, I'll always compliment them too, saying something like nice dress, then walking away, leaving them wondering what's wrong with their dress. Well, they started it :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
oh, no, not sarcastic at all, a touch sarcastic yes. tee hee hee. no, but if they would let you ha.. read moreoh, no, not sarcastic at all, a touch sarcastic yes. tee hee hee. no, but if they would let you hang in that spot in your mind free from judgment, maybe they wouldn't get the quips they seem to wonder so much about. when i encounter someone who is quiet, or with the 'b***h' face, i do generally think, oh, there just reflecting. maybe that is just because i understand myself to be.
I can relate. I just took a 3 day retreat away from everything and body because I just need space sometimes. I can get lost in my thoughts and not hear anything being said around me. It irritated my mom haha She always said, "you never listen to me". I like this poem jesse:) Awesome!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
thank you lynn, i know that feeling...too funny. I a good at that irritation thing when in my head.
I can relate to one inspiration line "don't take God's patience as His absence, He is always there with you".....I really loved the reality of this poem, as a human being(being able speak) i need silence to keep my mind refreshed....But silence does not mean bad everytime.....Hats off to you frnd.....Another marvellous one Jesse......
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
thank you dhiman, i love your words of wisdom there about God, always good for those my friend.
I know that feeling..I am a quiet person and I always stay in silent..i dont like talkin, so people who see me like that they always missunderstood this.. I kinda know what u were trying to say..
Good job
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
you seem to know exactly where i am going with this. people mistake silence for anger, or sadness a.. read moreyou seem to know exactly where i am going with this. people mistake silence for anger, or sadness all of the time. thanks for your review!
I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..