Alley

Alley

A Poem by jesserose99
"

inner child

"

In my darkest alley

I found you

    wondering lost

        without a clue


I held your hand

for I felt your fear

and said those who scared you


     were not near



Little girl

big bad world

torn apart

controlled for sure


Free to see

light of day

you don't have

to run away


I wish what I told you

were entirely true

but the same people are there,

and their hurt too


So come out to play

teach them the way

not to say

       cruel things today

© 2016 jesserose99


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"Fight to see
Light of day",
"so come out to play
Teach them the way
Not to say
Cruel things today".....Well you just awed me with your words...As i always tell you that you have an unique ability to enter into the reader's mind with such ease that the reader finds it very attached to his mind....Wonderful work as always Jesse with a lovely message....Full rating......

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Dhiman, you are too kind, in your review, I was speaking more of my own self then you, I feel like .. read more
Inject Positivity

8 Years Ago

Hey Jesse don't say that mate, you are a wonderful person, i always take inspiration from you to wri.. read more



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even as we age we still have that sensitivity, and it seems to grow as we get older, almost as if we revert to that child we once were...yes that inner child---but this could also be a parent trying to protect her child from what she (the parent) went through once...

really excellent write...at first i read the third line as "wandering" but then the more i thought about it "wondering" fit well for different reasons.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

thank you Jacob, i think your thought about the parent protecting from the cycle is a beautiful one
"Fight to see
Light of day",
"so come out to play
Teach them the way
Not to say
Cruel things today".....Well you just awed me with your words...As i always tell you that you have an unique ability to enter into the reader's mind with such ease that the reader finds it very attached to his mind....Wonderful work as always Jesse with a lovely message....Full rating......

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Dhiman, you are too kind, in your review, I was speaking more of my own self then you, I feel like .. read more
Inject Positivity

8 Years Ago

Hey Jesse don't say that mate, you are a wonderful person, i always take inspiration from you to wri.. read more

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jesserose99
jesserose99

lakewood, CO



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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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