"Fight to see
Light of day",
"so come out to play
Teach them the way
Not to say
Cruel things today".....Well you just awed me with your words...As i always tell you that you have an unique ability to enter into the reader's mind with such ease that the reader finds it very attached to his mind....Wonderful work as always Jesse with a lovely message....Full rating......
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Dhiman, you are too kind, in your review, I was speaking more of my own self then you, I feel like .. read moreDhiman, you are too kind, in your review, I was speaking more of my own self then you, I feel like I could always cut a word here or there, and then I still need to make it longer...so ever the struggle. So, thank you for your words, and remember, you are a beautiful poet, and don't ever let anyone, convince you otherwise my friend, if I for a second made you second guess your ability, then slap me silly with a slapjack!!
8 Years Ago
Hey Jesse don't say that mate, you are a wonderful person, i always take inspiration from you to wri.. read moreHey Jesse don't say that mate, you are a wonderful person, i always take inspiration from you to write poetry....You are a cherished frnd and im humble by your support and kindness frnd....
Very nice. Unfortunately my inner child still seems to enjoy running through the world kicking things over and smashing things with sticks. Fortunately, I keep him locked up in the basement =)
Jesserose99, Beautiful words portraying growth in strength and wisdom. I understood and felt your thoughts. Thank you for accepting my friend request, looking forward to sharing reviews. Richie B.
There is a sense of free-spiritedness to this poem despite playing on the notion of restraints and constraints of the outer and inner world.
Beautiful use of meter, and I adore the message of compassion and boldness at the end.
Inspiring...sometimes the reason for the bad, is because no one's taught them the good....
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
thank you Krizito, you are so right, its up to the ones who figure out how to do better, to teach th.. read morethank you Krizito, you are so right, its up to the ones who figure out how to do better, to teach the ones who don't know
Hauntingly beautiful words Jesse. I could almost picture the image of that inner child, lost in the big scary world, unsure of the kind words that she hears, never having grown used to kindness.
If only there was a kind someone for all of our inner children, young and old alike.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
it would be nice, but i suppose it teaches us lessons on what we want to be to the children in our l.. read moreit would be nice, but i suppose it teaches us lessons on what we want to be to the children in our lives when we grow. thank you acoustic
I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..