Jack

oh sweet love

Your love

warms my heart

when it feels

torn apart

I can't wait to see you

but

you can't wait to see me too

You lay your head in my lap

and look up at me

you kiss me and I go

       Yuck!

because you haven't brushed your teeth

still you have no forefingers

so your forgiven

just to love others you are driven

Except maybe the mailman

for him you disdain

I think in a different world

he caused your species pain

Oh, little jack Russell

some say you need a muzzle

I love your little rough and tumble

my best friend

my jack Russell

Caper

     the baper!

Reviews

[richieb]

Jesserose99, You got me, I was all full of your passionate love poem and then "YUCK' snapped my neck and I was had! Very clever. We have three basset hounds that allow my wife and I to share our home with them. Great write. Richie B.

[Yakovlevova]

This was really nice and lighthearted. Awesome poem!

[Asif Balouch]

Awww...Cutest poem indeed :)

[B. Boileau]

There's nothing like the unconditional love and devotion of a furry family member!

bill

[TheMalady]

Aw... This is so cute! >_< Your style is so neat! I love the last line: "I love your little rough and tumble my best friend my jack Russell Caper the baper!"

Cute! :) Thanks for sharing this! :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Playful penning here and sweet scenes come to mind.
Lovable and at the same time, a little smelly in an animal way.
faithful companion and friend to you!

[andrew mitchell]

The love they bring to our hearts, cats or dogs or any pet for that matter! A cute write close to your heart!

[Tom]

A fine doggie poem, he sounds like a bundle of joy and a very lovable companion to share time with, day & night !

[jesserose99]

thank you tom! I will stop by and review you as soon as I get a chance. I am glad your doggies seem to like my poem too!

[Mary Helda]

a very sweet poem...beautiful yet simple...i love your style of writing...

[jesserose99]

thank you mary, that means a lot, I appreciate your stopping by!

[Gaurav]

This is the kind of work that every writer would want to do. And you, my friend, have painted a very smooth and beautiful picture of love - honest and sweet. Thanks for sharing.

[jesserose99]

Thanks Guaravv....really glad you said just that!! thanks for stopping by!