Beautifully written Jesse. We all fight the good fight and resolve to be stronger, but the harsh reality is that we are human and fallible, we try to achieve so much and make it all look effortless, but those darned emotions keep us real and we see how we could have been stronger, but no matter how hard we try, we keep coming up short of our expectations. But we are all so much stronger than we think and deserve more credit for what we do achieve. Sadness or crying aren't a weakness, they are a release that we all need to move us on to the next challenge.
Beautifully captured.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you as always acoustic...I think sadness isn't a weakness as you say...and when we shame ourse.. read moreThank you as always acoustic...I think sadness isn't a weakness as you say...and when we shame ourselves we just produce self hate. I am glad that you enjoyed this!
We all need be spiritual warriors Jesse.....I find inspiration from it....Your poems are always expressed in a simple way but they deliver some kind of a message which i think very true to our daily life.....Writerscafe is proud of you....God bless you.......
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Dhiman...that means so much. I would love to think so...as do yours, (deliver a message) .. read moreThank you Dhiman...that means so much. I would love to think so...as do yours, (deliver a message) Dhiman, as do yours
9 Years Ago
In this constantly falling and hopeless world people can find happiness and inspiration from the wri.. read moreIn this constantly falling and hopeless world people can find happiness and inspiration from the writings of people like you, Kansas Marie Friedman and some others......Your writings has some funny and meaningful side which really lifts the reader after a hard day at work or start of a new morning....You almost surprises your readers by the concept you choose to write about.....
Beautifully written Jesse. We all fight the good fight and resolve to be stronger, but the harsh reality is that we are human and fallible, we try to achieve so much and make it all look effortless, but those darned emotions keep us real and we see how we could have been stronger, but no matter how hard we try, we keep coming up short of our expectations. But we are all so much stronger than we think and deserve more credit for what we do achieve. Sadness or crying aren't a weakness, they are a release that we all need to move us on to the next challenge.
Beautifully captured.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you as always acoustic...I think sadness isn't a weakness as you say...and when we shame ourse.. read moreThank you as always acoustic...I think sadness isn't a weakness as you say...and when we shame ourselves we just produce self hate. I am glad that you enjoyed this!
I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..