Discombobulated

I misplaced my mind somewhere....hmm

Im discombobulated

my mind too populated

I think I over complicate it

with things who knows where they go

Trying to find where I placed my mind

I left it some place I know

I had mental disorder

So I think my mind took off for the border

and Im left with this pen in my hand

Im sorry, what did I just say man?

Reviews

[dan]

Yes, the mind can sometimes take detours in the thought process, leaving one with an ethereal tint to their mental mish-mash and an obstacle to astute thinking. Your imagery and wording conveys that idea in a greatly substantive way. Hey, like I said, I'm becoming a fan of yours. Keep me in your loop, please? take care...dan

[jesserose99]

Thanks Dan! I appreciate your reading this...and you keep me in the loop too!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah me too....too many things on the mind...loss of concentration sometimes in class...not being able to sleep as my mind is running like a track meet...i hear ya on this one....needs a bit of editing...but so solid in theme...

j.

[jesserose99]

I think I can see at least some of the editing you speak of upon second glance, thank you for your review...I imagine as a teacher it must be hard to keep track of everything.

[alifeacoustic]

Oh, ,me and this feeling are very old friends. A too populated mind sounds lovely, until you realise it's two am and everyone is having a party in your head and you can't sleep. I blame my brain secretary personally. She is a lovely girl, but I'm guessing dyslexic. She is always filing thoughts and memories in the wrong place. But I've grown used to her quirks, plus she takes the heat off it being my fault :)

[jesserose99]

ahh, the old dyslexic secretary. poor lady, but alas what can you do...firing would just be rude. Plus an absent mind is nice now and again!

[alifeacoustic]

It certainly is :)

[gentlekindness]

LOL....I can totally relate to this. It was funny, but also something that is not always funny at the time. I have these cognitive deficit moments from PTSD. I liked being able to see it from this humorous....being able to laugh at your own brain....perspective.

This is one of my favorite poems I have read lately....and I have been reading a lot of poetry, both on here and on wordpress.

Much love,
Annie💕💙

[jesserose99]

Thank you Annie, I am sorry to hear you suffer with that. I wonder if PTSD, as much pain and trauma as it has caused has also opened up your mind some, because you clearly have some gifts there. I really appreciate you always returning the review...very nice when that happens.

[gentlekindness]

I think you are right. I have come to see truths about the light and the dark, that were hidden behind the veil before.
Now I feel a purpose of sharing those truths but also am caught in undermining situations. We will see how it plays out.
I have videos on youtube, if you ever get a chance to watch....Annie Mimi Hall YouTube channel.
You can find by googling.
Talk to you soon. Thank you for your compassionate heart.
Annie💕👭💙

[Jacob Clifford]

Preach it! My brain just goes on vacation when I need it most, it feels.

[jesserose99]

Don't I know it..im sorry what was that?? hee hee!!