Time

just a thought

Third eye opens

my souls mind

to a time that

shines without hands

Reviews

[David Marsden]

A timeless carefree world, that takes me back to my childhood. That's what it says to me.
This poem has so much in just thirteen words. It conjures up numerious thoughts. I think it could mean many things to many people.
If only I could use that third eye, I've tried through concentration and meditation but with little success.
I think we all need to relax completely now and again, just as the poem says.

[jesserose99]

I really think you hit close to where this was for a lot of people, and it opened up a new meaning for me to tell you true. Meditation is a weird thing, you can go a long time thinking it might not be your thing and then life intervenes and takes one thing away, and it strengthens that area. Who knows, that realm is a funny place.

[David Marsden]

Yes it's ironic that when you are busy with lifes long continuous rush hour you have no time to relax, and your mind won't let you, when that's the very medicine you need. When you have time on your hands and feel more relaxed it is easier to meditate.

[jesserose99]

So true, sounds like you use your third eye just fine, maybe not aware of it being used, but it is a different kind of joy expressed here.

[Gaurav]

A walk into the dimension without past and future.....beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

[dan]

A very nice and concise interpretation and quantification of time, a concept that is so varied it almost defies description. Incorporating the hands (of a clock?) into the write narrows down the spectrum into a much smaller window; this sets the framework into a finite space in time. My compliments! take care...dan

[jesserose99]

Thanks Dan! I appreciate the visit, you always return the review. I will too!

[LapseOfMind]

Very nice! Short yet powerful! Great job

[jesserose99]

I am glad you liked it! did you get a read request from me for Hello me? I don't normally send them, but my computer froze right when I sent it, so I don't know if you got it.

[LapseOfMind]

Lol I haven't a clue. I just logged on and seen that someone had commented on a poem of yours so I decided to read it. I'll read that poem now though

[wordman]

the third eye opens,interesting concept,i like it jess

[jesserose99]

Thank you wordman I am glad you like it!

[andrew mitchell]

brilliant, simple yet profound

[jesserose99]

Thank you Andrew...oh, and I read all my read requests lol...so there!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol.............................

[alifeacoustic]

I love this, so simple yet profound. A time that shines without hands conjures thoughts of childhood, where the only concept of time we had was when we played all day and realised we were hungry, therefore time to refuel, so we could run around more, carefree and laughing, jumping, skipping. Three things which you don't see adults do nearly enough of. Never mind these fancy courses for stress management, just join in next time you see kids play skipping ropes and you'll forget all about that pesky grown up stuff, like work, bills etc.
Although this is not scientifically tested, I guarantee 100% success :)

[jesserose99]

You speak so true...who wants to live in grown up world all the time anyway

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when i was a kid...time had no hands...and i was tied behind the back of my childhood...not a care in the world...no tha third eye, reminds me of when time didn't move so damn fast as it does now...

but that old time still shines in my memory.

[jesserose99]

You are so right...it reminds me of your time poem...disappearing with a shot that wont go back

[samparks,sam]

Every time I right
I remember you right
nothing is fine
till I not remember you right

[jesserose99]

Thank you my friend!

[samparks,sam]

Friend ship is nice
if some one realized it nice
Nothing to in hide
every thing of my like
you also included in like

[Robert Parlange]

Just wondering, when my third eye opens, will it be near-sighted too? To be honest, there are some souls I really don't want to look into.

[jesserose99]

maybe that is where third eye blind came from...lol