"Does the sun wonder does the moon ponder Do the stars blunder" This was my favorite part of the poem becuase you have a point. These things don't question who or what they are, they just are and they shine regaurdless. They are who they be. I really liked that perspective, because we humans can't seem to be content with that idea. Wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing.
A free-thinker writing a free-verse poem. Sounds right to me, I think. :) Let's hope thoughts are always free Jesse, but I wouldn't put it past someone someday to try to charge for it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
that's funny...I think you are right there...sad to say.
I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..