Blue

passing blue

Blue

take me over

with a new hue

sadness like a wave

exit from emptiness I crave

still I drink it in

let the sorrow be my friend

it's just passing in flight

Ill be red by tonight

like the tide

crest of heartache I ride

Blue

takes me over

with a new hue

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

magic flow here Jesse. A natural you are weaving your thoughts into words of endearment if thats the right word if not lets say magic!

[jesserose99]

thank you Andrew, your kind words mean a lot!!

[LapseOfMind]

Wow! Wonderful poetry! I've felt this way so many and your words describe it perfectly. Thank you for writing this, well done

[alifeacoustic]

A colour that is getting more than its fair share of use these days, wanders over our path, with no hint at how long this most unwelcome of guests will stay. It leaves us feeling head heavy and uninspired, its prescence making itself more than aware to its guest. Ive even moved house and it still found me.
Wishing you rainbows of colour exploding around uou this weekend..... But not blue. :)