Crazy - haiku

my first haiku

      Crazy in my soul

twisted shadows in my mind

     my heart I can find

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Follow your heart and the rest follows. A lot said in few words. Just fantastico!

[Ohioman]

Sounds okay to me.

How about the rest of you guys?

[jesserose99]

Thank you for stopping by, and checking it out..:)

[Ohioman]

No problem.

[alifeacoustic]

This is really good
Says a lot in so few words
Bravo, young lady :)

I never got the hang of haikus :)

[jesserose99]

sounds like you do just fine to me...lol

[McBear]

Hmm. I liked this a lot. Very few words, yet deep in meaning.

[jesserose99]

Thanks Poison...glad to know it came across.

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And your heart speaks beautifully :) Love it!

[jesserose99]

Thank you Lynn!

[Tobias H. Reese]

try with a kigo soon!! wink wink. I'm looking forward to more submissions!!
Namaste.

[Tobias H. Reese]

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[Tobias H. Reese]

You may benefit from reading:

"HAIKU OR SENRYU?
HOW TO TELL THE DIFFERENCE"
by Elizabeth St Jacques
(google it for some great advice and info!!)

[Ed Hart]

deep in the soul cave
shadows echo from the walls
the heart hypnotized

[jesserose99]

that's beautiful Ed...I can feel that myself.

[A hare off]

First Haiku, perfect haiku. Message, emotions, syllables: Check, check, check. As long as you can find your heart Jesse, the other stuff will be easy to deal with.