Phone

Phone

A Poem by jesserose99
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omg...I forgot my phone...ahhhh

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Forgot my phone today

I was naked as a jay

didn't know what to say

to people talking to my face


it was scary as can be

people looking at me

I made a call with my hand

no phone in a phone land

© 2015 jesserose99


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dan
I have heard that walking up and speaking to someone is known as "face mail." Believe it or not I don't carry a cell phone, call me a dinosaur; but your idea is very clever and lives very much in the moment. Very well done! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


Those jittery finger blues. How did you manage to get through the day having to have face time with actual people. No status updates and pingy noises all day...sounds bliss :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

8 Years Ago

I know...it actually was...ill have to leave it more often.
alifeacoustic

8 Years Ago

Yes. You can always tell the ones who have left their phone at home. Panicked eyes, trembling finger.. read more
we have become dependent, haven't we. this was funny but scary at the same time. it does feel like you are naked when this happens. very fun Jesse

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jesserose99

8 Years Ago

thanks, it is quite scary. I went to the doc's office...and was surrounded by people with them in t.. read more
laughing... face-to-face - really? people still do that?!? Nah............

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

I know...what exactly is that?

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Added on December 11, 2015
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jesserose99
jesserose99

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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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