Pain

trying to pass off my pain to some theif :)

Pain in my hands and in my poor feet

Ill put in a suitcase and carry on to boot

and hope that someone picks up as loot

but then someone might think it a plot

from a terrorist leaving pain

what if I get caught

so I guess I'll just deal

not a reasonable dream to think somoene'd steal

Reviews

[David Scott]

I know this state of mind... Dealing with it, but always wishing you could pass the cup beyond yourself. However, I really doubt we would want anyone to actually feel it instead of us... I wouldn't wish my pain on anyone... Someday, all pain will cease.
Nice tone and great coping mechanism (humor).

[jesserose99]

you are too right...I wouldn't really want anyone else to pick that suitcase up...lol. Bad karma. Thanks for stopping by and your kind words. :)

[Inject Positivity]

Awwwhhh! Jesse your experience with words and thinking is just brilliant.....What a concept of pain.....Title is just too good.....

[jesserose99]

I know..i tried but I couldn't leave without it...I guess it's my pain...lol

[andrew mitchell]

If only one could pass it on! Isn't that voodoo!

[jesserose99]

I hope not because I have decided to give it a go...lol ;)

[alifeacoustic]

Ah, to have all that hurt and pain bundled in a parcel and be relieved of it all. Now that sounds good. Think I will give it a try :)

[jesserose99]

yeah..if was that easy I think there might be a lot more suspicious packages laying about.

[alifeacoustic]

Mountains of them :)

[KingDavid]

Simple. Funny, and with good reasoning. I like it

[jesserose99]

Thanks David!!