Pieces

or just things people I see everyday know nothing of

Pieces of me

I wish I could share

Pieces my soul

just wants to bear

there are things misunderstood

I would be a fool

       I would be no good

So I open a window

a door to my mind

people can read my poems and find

a door or a window

leading them to see

pieces within

someone trying to be

free

from the pieces like secrets

      locking my doors and shutting my windows

from the people each day

I see and I know

hiding things I wish I could show

Reviews

[CiNtsaLis]

Elsa? *Lols* I'm just kidding I feel the "shutting people out" emotion racing through this piece. It's amazing actually, I really like it! (:

[jesserose99]

your really funny...:) and thank you!

[CiNtsaLis]

*giggles* You are most welcomed

[alifeacoustic]

Yes, I know that feeling well. If only people had the time to stop and listen, get to know the person, we would all be living in a better place.
I have been becoming more and more reclusive the past few years, through my own choice, but there are always moments when a kind word beats any wealth.
Beautifully written glimpse through the window that is you.

[Jacob Clifford]

I really like this. I don't have any specifics to comment on. I just like the feel and meaning of this.