Cheetah

a cheater by trade

He was a cheetah

she a giraffe

he told her tall tales

his lines he did craft

she liked her beer

a long neck please Dear

he liked them fast

a long way from here

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Cheetahs never prosper. Fate catches them always, like the lies they tell, but can never quite remember all the lies from the little truths.
A lovely quirky touch to a serious problem. Keep the head held high....which considering she is the giraffe, shouldnt be a problem :)

[jesserose99]

Thanks friend...much appreciated! :)

[samparks,sam]

good thank for feel it. now cheer.

[Krizito]

Impressive with a sprinkle of humour. Kinda enjoyed myself reading it.
Whatever happened to the cheetah...

[jesserose99]

glad you enjoyed it! he's found himself a lovely dear somewhere.

[Krizito]

Lucky Mr Cheetah!

[andrew mitchell]

A clever write but I like the cheetah! Why couldn't cheating be called Takeaway or fast food something I don't like lol

[jesserose99]

poor cheetah...tarred with the brush of the cheetah!

[andrew mitchell]

Another the poor ole leopard! A leopard never changes its spots lol The cat family really cops it lol

[Jacob Clifford]

Hah. This is good: a short cheeky poem. It tells a story and wraps it up in a bow.

[jesserose99]

Thank you Clifford as always!

[A hare off]

Funny, now if he could only craft her a draft. A fun little poem for a Monday afternoon.

[jesserose99]

thank you my friend!!

[Chris]

ahhh... such "spots" glowed in her Dear lights.