Climbed a Hill

just a thought

Climbed a hill

just to find

another hill

the other side

I'm up for down,

then I might be

down for up

it's change I need

Reviews

[A hare off]

The only thing constant is change. We keep climbing hills only to find that once we are on top, the only way left is down. We can only hope the next hill is not near as tough to scale. Now I am out of breath. I think I will rest here in the valley for a bit. :) Short, simple and a great poetic message.

[jesserose99]

Thanks for that!!

[alifeacoustic]

Maybe just stay put and build a house atop the hill and enjoy the view. I know thats not much of a comment, but more my ideal. 360 degree view and very few cold callers :)

[jesserose99]

ooh, now that does sound lovely...lol.

[alifeacoustic]

Yes, just hope the car doesnt break down at the bottom :)

[DirectTangent]

Witty, tells of a confinement of restlessness and wanting to change tempo - stasis in motion.

Smart, amusing - something to which many may relate.

I like it.