Lost My Mind

how can we lose something that might not be ours

Flaw?

I lost my mind

Who ever has their mind in the first place?

Was it mine to lose, like the mask I wear for a face?

I don't think we own our mind.

Maybe I found peace of mind

When I found piece of mine

because we all share the great consciousness,

just divided by, what thin barrier I wonder?

Was my mind floating in the great blue yonder?

Am I crazy if a piece of his mind I ponder?

What lets me in?

Where do my thoughts end and his begin?

I lost my mind,

but look what is found

Thoughts are they pieces of mine this time, or

did I borrow them when I crossed his line?

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

My thoughts entirely, or are they?
I definitely agree the mind is only the tendrils end of a greater shared consciousness. Almost everyone who makes a great scientific discovery, writes beautiful music or writes masterpieces, agree to a feeling that the idea came from the ether and out of the blue.
And what else love, if not two charged connections firing in unison. It also explaind deja vu, the sense of being stared at amongst many more.
As mulder said, the truth is out there.
Gorgeous write. Perfect.

[jesserose99]

Thank you acoustic...you hit the nail on the head to what I was trying to say. Thanks for looking deeply again. I told Cassie she had a piece of my mind...but we must be sharing peace of mine. lol

[alifeacoustic]

I was thinking you were going to say that :)

[jesserose99]

lol, I just got that...you really are funny!

[alifeacoustic]

I do try, thank you. :)

[A hare off]

I'd be in my right mind if I hadn't left it someplace else. This one puts the mind to work, creative thoughts coming from a creative mind, wherever it may be.

[Chris]

So many ways of looking within this one... some really good, some not as good. But the thoughts are all real.

[Willard Wells]

Every mind a life into itself. My mind and consciousness seem to have their own agenda beyond what I may think. Rather than being in control it is more a matter of live and let live. Sometimes the demons do have to be subdued before I make a mistake and do something more stupid than normal.

Very nice write young lady.

[jesserose99]

I know its easy to do! Thanks again!

[Cassie]

I relate somehow, it is like you took words from my mind and my heart and wrote my thoughts. I have also lost my mind. I do things, I allow things happen to me and later wonder, what the hell was i thinking. Signs of some one who has lost their minds. This is good. Although you made me feel melancholic

[jesserose99]

Thank you Cassie as always a lovely review...maybe me and you share piece of mind.

[Cassie]

Yes I will and we could help each other out through a collabo perhaps. Seems we have the same thoughts..

[jesserose99]

That's a good idea...that would be uber fun!

[Cassie]

now onto it!!!! fuunnnnn