There's a Curse On Me

There's a Curse On Me

A Poem by jesserose99
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Song Lyrics-can't find a man without a lady tagging behind

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There's a curse on me

I swear you understand

there's always a chic

when I find me a man


There's always a she

just a tappin her foot

when I come around

to take a quick look


There's a curse on me, I swear you understand


You ain't gotta be blind to see

There ain't nothing wrong with me

I might be a pain my friend

Damn these women


She's at the window

and I can see her stare

I close the shades

cause I am in the bare


She knows I'm with him

just a getting it on

he went and told me

that he was done


There's a curse on me, I swear you understand

© 2015 jesserose99


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I like it and am trying to fit it to a genre so I can match it up to a tune in my mind. But the old song "I put a spell on you" by Screamin Jay Hawkins keeps getting in the way, so now that tune with your lyrics are stuck in my head. I still like it I just wish I could turn down the volume down Ha! Ha! :~)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This sounds like a song. Loved it. would like to hear the beat

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Your right Cassie it is a song!! Its got a bluesy beat! Thank you!
Cassie

8 Years Ago

I am just seeing your description above
Smooth, soulful words, paintng a picture of lady luck leaving you to your own devices when all you gotta roll is a pair of sixes. Can hear this as a soul/jazz fusion, played inthe key of regret.
Beautifully captured.

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Thanks again...always know how to lift a gal up!!
alifeacoustic

8 Years Ago

I do try :)
haha a nice flow Jesse, I love the last two stanzas or are they verses if its a song anyway I don't think you are cursed. A nice song with a tinge of sadness plus a sprinkle of sadness:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


jesserose99

8 Years Ago

Thanks for that Andrew!

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jesserose99
jesserose99

lakewood, CO



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I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..

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