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just a quick thought

Just when I think I am done for
and I've no more to say

Writing becomes an avenue
to a freer way

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

You certainly pack a lot in to few words. It is always when you least expect it that you find the thoughts popping up like bubbles in champagne.
The art of putting down the pen and leaving it there is one I struggle with, which is why I know I will find more words on the page when I wake.
I would only ever worry if the day comes that the pages are blank :)

[jesserose99]

I am terrible..i fall asleep with the pen and paper next to me sometimes. obsessed a bit? thanks for your kind review!

[alifeacoustic]

You are very welcome :)

[Johnny]

Nice and short! Alot of people like to write extensively on certain things and I feel like the denseness of a short poem captures more than what otherwise could

[jesserose99]

Thank you Dominique!