Untamed

A Poem by jesserose99

rising of the spirit

Breath of fire, be my desire
help me rise a little higher

Wings of free
wrap around me
help me to finally see

The truth through the flames
the wild heart untamed

© 2015 jesserose99

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SariahM

I love it! all I suggest is that you make it a little longer... Keep adding stanzas, and It will be perfect.

Posted 9 Years Ago

fierceauthor

Can you write a long one just for me? I love your writing jesserose99!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Your reviews have been too sweet!! I will write a long one and just for you!! I am not really famil.. read more

9 Years Ago

APPRECIATED And wish you the very best on your pen journey

Chris

Is souls meant as a singular possessive? Or is it more than one soul? I feel confused with how sire fits within the frame.

The first stanza doesn't "feel" as if it belongs here - it more defines a state of being that may better serve as a precursor to the actual poem. The Heat of the remaining intent - is evident, well tied, readily understood and quite standalone.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

I love it when someone makes me think about my poetry...I never mind the good old axe if it makes it.. read more

9 Years Ago

Nicely done...

redzone

we need more wild hearts untamed!!

redzone

Posted 9 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 4, 2015
Last Updated on December 4, 2015

Author

jesserose99

lakewood, CO

About

I am a tarot reader and numerologist, who loves to write poetry. I also write songs and love to sing and play guitar. I love art too, so clearly I just have a passion for creativity. Also love my dog.. more..