Love

just love

Sugar sweet
can't compete
feel the heat
of love on fire

It bows, it bends,
it burns, it wins
it forgives sins
this love sweet love

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Jesse,
From the warmth of your sparkling stardust ink, there dances across, down, and up off the page into the gentle places within this bard's mind, heart, and soul, reflecting the tender knowing of yours.
I love the imaginative imagery and sensations that flow from your words to touch the senses, how smooth and seamless your lines flow into each other, forming verses that sweep one away … hallmarks of a master poetess.

Yes, "love, sweet love", indeed! A most brilliant little piece, Lovely Lady-Poet!
Thank you, ever-so warmly and gratefully, for the endearing moment you've shared! ⁓ Richard


100/100

[jesserose99]

Thank you for your kind review...trying to get the flow right is always a concern of mind so I appreciate hearing that. What a way with words you have, even your reviews sound poetic..:)

[Richard🖌]

How pleasurably my visit has been here with you … you are most welcome, and I thank you with great joy! ; )

[DirectTangent]

I'm thinking that you really nailed this one.

In eight lines, you packaged what it is that many seek - a sweet heat, an ultimate passion - one that yields and flows as it equally demands and directs. The conciseness of it begs to ask why we would complicate such purity.

Thank for this. So nicely done.

[jesserose99]

Thanks Tangent! I appreciate your saying so.:)

[alifeacoustic]

Yes, it does. We forgive and forget, change the rules and move the goalposts for love, and never mind doing it for love. If only we could be so forgiving in all of lifes arena.
Superbly written. Soft and delicate wisdom of one who knows :)

[jesserose99]

Thanks for that, so nice to hear. :)

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely sweet take on love and its tricks! A lovely share!