Creative Invention

Incessant luminescence
waiting inside
persistent insistence
crossing the line

I walk within
I walk outside
I need my pen
to coincide

with my need for freedom
with my need for pain
haunting me, helping me
escape my brain


Creative invention
poems in my mind
focused intention
the thoughts that reside

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully crafted. The chaos and confusion calms when thoughts turn to written form, but wrings out so much frustration and emotion pre creation, that we are left wondering if it was worth it. But still we fight on.
Loved it.

[jesserose99]

:) thank you kind sir!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the inside and the outside meet between the lines...those lines are on paper, and that is where the thoughts that reside inside, find their way to fruition...

i really like the philosophy of your poetry..

j.

[Flopp]

It flows well! I like it. Makes me think about writing poetry ;)

[jesserose99]

Thanks for that! Much appreciated:)

[Michael Stevens]

An excellent poem of how we mine our brains for topics, both good and bad!

[jesserose99]

Thanks Michael!

[Michael Stevens]

You bet, you're very welcome!