Ray of Light

Poem about the spirit

Ray of light, breathe my soul, breathe it deeply down below....

Breathe it sweetly, up on high...breathe it out when I die.

Diamond sky in the night

Filling my soul with light

Telling me that I am loved

From beings high above

See your way through the fire

Penetrate my inner liar

Do you know who you are?

Do you quake when life gets hard?

I ask myself do I burn bright?

Can you see my soul at night?

Am I dim...

or do I glow......

deep inside my inner know.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

How did i miss this one!!! This is top ranked Jesse, the thought behind this is very very deeply felt....Wonderfully worked up....The questions you have asked in the poem made it much more classy.....

[jesserose99]

so glad you enjoyed it..this was my first poem that got me writing poetry again. I can't believe that it has been as popular as it has, makes me feel lovely inside.

[Inject Positivity]

Well it deserves to be popular Jesse....Im glad that it inspired you to write poetry again, otherwise we could have missed the opportunity to read your amazing works.....

[Solar]

Beauty of spirit illuminates this gem of a poem - lovely its sounds!


Diamond sky in the night

Filling my soul with light

[jesserose99]

Thank you Solar, I appreciate you and your clever your way with words, I see them as both kind, and as giving me a wee giggle.

[Solar]

Thank you for your writing that is both light and filled with Light.

[Malcolm Reynolds]

Great poem, really enjoyed that!!

[jesserose99]

Thank you Malcom!

[Nani Mino]

i loved it . simple but heavy meaning i feel that.

[Chris]

Questions for the starlight of our diamond skies... and answers whispered cross the night.

[alifeacoustic]

This starts wonderfully and just keeps getting better. I love the ending....deep inside my inner know. To know someone so purely is a prize we can only dream of achieving, yet when it happens, it is effortless, awe inspiring and known without thinking, reciprocated, for you can only hold such beauty when it is freely given.
Glad I decided to play cath up on your previous writes. Perfect.

[Sabina Sindhu]

This poem is simple and beautiful.

[Nadia_2]

Really loved this poem. Amazing work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. You took the reader to place of question and inner thoughts.
"Am I dim...
or do I glow......
deep inside my inner know"
Some people do glow and some people are burn-out. All of us need to find places of peace and comfort. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ranbir Singh]

Really good work
It was only by chance that I saw your work
But now I shall keep a tab on all your writings.