Overfilled Morning Coffee

Overfilled Morning Coffee

A Poem by Jesse F Hayes
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Dabbling with haikus.

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winter still passing

coffee rings on the table

remind me of you

© 2008 Jesse F Hayes


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I really like this. It starts off haiku, but very quickly turns into a love poem. Yet, if you're not a fan of coffee rings on the table, you could be glad he's gone...or something. I get myself all tangled sometimes. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

there's a lot said in this haiku...the coffee rings carry a lot of symbolism and open up the mind to a spectrum of emotions...very cool haiku, Jesse

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

A lovely piece, Jesse. Absence and heartache in precious few words.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hell, I think it's good, but I don't know too much about Haikus. ;)

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really like this... structurally this is a well written haiku, but emotionally this is an amazing poem. Does that make any sense? LOL... I guess what I'm trying to say is that you've taken a very confiding style of poetry and still managed to make it have great imagery and real emotion.

Simple, Beautiful, and Sad...

Good job. I enjoyed reading it.

Adam

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

...My my...I don't think I like coffee anymore...although this does make much, much sense. And with Haiku it is hard to manage no? Good luck Miss Hayes. Keep up this amazing writing.



-Belial

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Jesse F Hayes
Jesse F Hayes

Tulsa, OK



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Jesse lives in Tulsa, Oklahoma with a dog named Adara and various puppies named after desserts. She likes to wear sweaters two sizes too big and jeans one size too small. She drinks entirely too muc.. more..

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