Poem #3

A Poem by Jesse F Hayes

I know this is the poem that my song 'Someday' was based off of, but I can't find the notebook that the handwritten version is in. I'm moving, so hopefully someday in the future I can find it and put it back up here. (Sorry, couldn't resist the play on words.)

© 2008 Jesse F Hayes

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Gandré

Structure is correct, rhyme too. It is clear in the message, a pleasant read. thx for sharing.

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Jinx

Nice... and V left you a review - Wow! ;p

I like this, and I can't wait for that book to come out. It will be soon, I hope!

Love ya cousin! ;)

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bekka

I love it. This is very well writen. My favorite stanza was

"Someday you'll come around again
When you see what you have missed
But I can't promise that I'll stay"

I can relate to this in so many ways....

good job girl. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

V	the one who got away is never aware of how much they mattered... V Posted 17 Years Ago the one who got away is never aware of how much they mattered... V Rating /100 2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 10, 2008

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Jesse F Hayes

Tulsa, OK

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Jesse lives in Tulsa, Oklahoma with a dog named Adara and various puppies named after desserts. She likes to wear sweaters two sizes too big and jeans one size too small. She drinks entirely too muc.. more..