Catch Me

Catch Me

A Poem by Jesse F Hayes
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I figure 14 year olds are uploading poetry on here left and right, so I can unload - I mean - upload some poetry I wrote when I was 14.

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I feel you standing there
I just might be falling
Even more in love with you
Could you catch me

I think I'm falling apart
It just might be you're gone
So long that I can't tell
Could you catch me

© 2008 Jesse F Hayes


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I agree with the review below. Short, sweet and to the point. I know what you're saying and trying to portray in this poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short sweet and to the point. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the contrast between the two stanzas. There's a quick shift that a lot poems take forever to build up - like mine. It's well done. I just watched The End of the Affair. This fits it somehow. I like when that happens.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 10, 2008

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Jesse F Hayes
Jesse F Hayes

Tulsa, OK



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Jesse lives in Tulsa, Oklahoma with a dog named Adara and various puppies named after desserts. She likes to wear sweaters two sizes too big and jeans one size too small. She drinks entirely too muc.. more..

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