Say

Say

A Poem by Jesse F Hayes
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A song off an album I'll record... someday.

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I don't know what to say to make it plain

I love you no matter what's at stake

I don't mind if it's sunny or it rains

I love you and that's never going to change

 

Maybe someday you'll come back to me

I don't know I never know what to say

When you go I don't know I never know what to say

 

I don't know any way to take your pain

But I love you so I'll take all the blame

I can't breathe every time I see your face

Cause I love you I'll never walk away

 

Maybe someday you will finally see

What I see I never know what to say

When you go I don't know I never know what to say say say

 

I don't know how to make you know I'll wait

I love you   I love you

 

Maybe someday you will hear me sing

I don't know I never know what to say

Please don't go oh  I never know what to say  say

© 2008 Jesse F Hayes


Author's Note

Jesse F Hayes
I started writing this song about my high school sweetheart, and somewhere in the middle it became about a friend I've recently parted ways with. Then it kinda jumped back to the high school boy. I hate the third line, but I promise it doesn't sound as Wham!-ish as it reads.

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its perfect if yo idea was writing for a high school sweetheart.. ;) otherwise too, i guess it would make a good song......do record it someday..... :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well if it's not meant to sound like Wham,
then it's all about how to arrange music
around your words.
Anyway I like the lyrics, they are telling
everything, everything that's necessary.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL It doesn't sound Wham-ish to me. I think it's beautiful! =) It flows perfectly... and I'm trying to get at least one damn point here... ah, there it is. =p You know I can't review poetry, and that includes songs.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jesse F Hayes
Jesse F Hayes

Tulsa, OK



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Jesse lives in Tulsa, Oklahoma with a dog named Adara and various puppies named after desserts. She likes to wear sweaters two sizes too big and jeans one size too small. She drinks entirely too muc.. more..

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