All the Real Faces

Well, here it is cold and naked
A shriveled falsity became truth with some pressing
Another garbage bound love letter in a damp afternoon
Again, I found only superficial differences

At the core you're like all other selfish mediocrity
You may own that pretty face, but not mine

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

its too bad some people have to be like that, but they are..

you described this perfectly.

loved the last line.
Antonio :)

[InkSlinger]

Let the lies, fall where they may
Truth always bares fruit.

Nicely written, deep and thought provoking!!

[Brandon]

I really like that a lot, i cant really explain why but theres some about the words and how it sounds that just made me really enjoy it.

[nicolo]

"A thousand plastic flowers don't make a desert bloom. A thousand empty faces don't fill an empty room." --Fritz Perls

I thought of that quote after reading this.
I like the you pull these words out of your gut.

[nostal]

wowowowowowowowowowowowowowowow
dazzling, stuff.
Starts abrupt and ends abrupt. nice static flow.

[dieuxsansculte]

"Smiling Faces Sometimes"

tell lies. They don't tell the truth.

"Smiling Faces Sometimes"

pretend to be your friends.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U84Ctl7rL34

Can you dig it?

[BlindedMinded]

Great way to express how you feel.I beleive that every writing peice is a part of you.

[shoaib]

awesome writing and thoughts