And I know you.

Retrospection leads me to thinkin'

Seven months isn't a long time

Unless you're being strung out

With useless, empty lies

 

And I know that you're just better

Then everyone together

And I know that I was lucky

To have known you

 

Ha ha.

 

Mixed-tape ambitons

Led me to this creation

And I'm glad you're into empty girls

All except your girlfriend

 

And I know that I can't blame you

That it's just the way you are

Taking the weakest part of everyone

Is bound to leave a scar

 

And I know that you're one promise

That I really tried to keep

But your advice, it was decieving

And you took the best of me

 

But I know that you love

The sweet smell of vanilla

And you're in your element

When you play the violin

 

Ready, set, don't be imperfect

Or you'll throw her away like the rocks to the day

Fingers crossed for her, that really gets your heart

Reviews

[Annelise]

This was really amazing. I dated a guy like this, and every word was as if it was coming out of my mouth.

"And I know that you're just better

Then everyone together

And I know that I was lucky

To have known you



Ha ha."

This made me laugh and cringe at the same time, i've almost said those things myself. I loved the way in which you wrote the piece. Slight bitterness, but maybe more sadness, because in the end you are the one who knows him best. This was so well written and I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Becca]

Oh, this is very interesting.

I like the way that it starts off like you're a little angry then it tapers off like you're accepting it all and how it's all worked out.