A thousand 'Sorrys' wont fix this

Faded gun shots call to the sunset

Picture framed and kept unknown

I guess that this wasn't his season

Earnest in the fight for wrong

 

Shattered glass litters the graveyard

Empty voices scream his name

He's a puppet in this race for freedom

It's tearing up his mental frame

 

Classify false information

All the critics can provide

But he was there in mind and body

Summersaulting worlds collide

 

And mixing terror shakes the sunrise

Light uncovers awful deeds

He sees the damage he's created

Reckless and permenantly

Reviews

[Voice]

This is amazingly written. The way it flows is just beautiful every word has you on the edge of your seat I just love it. Great write...

Voice

[theperfectfit]

Loved your use of terminology. I liked the title a lot too. I read this over like four times, it was such a smooth and nice read. Very wonderful, great work :D

[Silvario]

wow, very nice! a beautiful use words put together with an easy flowing structure. this was a fast smooth read. well done. i really enjoyed. :)