[untitled]

I don't know... this has no flow, no rhythm... no real anything.

What new force has repelled us?
Wrenching hate from love and glares from smiles
The invisble fire has torn us all apart
This new inferno has destroyed everything I ever felt
But opened my eyes, I see right through you now
There was no new force, only the absence of another
And I'm stuck having no power to stop them
And hoping that only time will heal the wounds you've wrought
The blood on my hands, was all for you
Now I'm forced to wipe them clean and start anew
I gave it up, I gave it all up for you
And all you ever did was live your denial and tug on my heartstrings
Look, there is too much wrong with your stupid philosophy
I was untouchable, but now you've touched me and I lost it all
I gave it all, gave it all to you
And all you could ever do was live your life
So you shall live...
So I have died...

 

Reviews

[ShadowHaze]

Ok, I liked it. No.. loved it. No, no rhythm, no flow, but it... I don't know... It had a certain something to it.

As for the title, you could keep it untitled, but you COULD title it 'Untouchable... Until now' I know it doesn't match most of the poem, but it matches parts of it. I can't think of anymore titles, but if I do, I will let you know :)