I Never Liked You.

I don't like that one person.

I was thrown into your presence
I never wanted it, I never needed it
But you were so content in thinking that untrue
Even now our paths have parted
And you continue to think you had a part in my ascension
Well I've got a secret for you
Whether you believe me or not
You're wrong
You can't help create something that bears no similarity
I'm nothing like you
Stop disgracing my blood
Stop pretending there's something there isn't
You see life as something to be accomplished
When I see it as an object to live
We'll never be on the same page
So stop thinking you're on my level
B***h.

Reviews

[The DuchessPoet]

I guess the universal anthem for disdain (to sum it all up) is "b***h"
Man what a noun that started off as a female dog or fox (literally) but i guess she was a dog to think that she should try and love the protagonist in this piece...
How dare her to think that he was worthy!
This is interesting, to say the least!

I could write a very interesting response to this poem... trust me! (wink)

The Duchess,

[ShadowHaze]

woooow.... I loved this... So much emotion and truth. And then the end really brought it all together. Wonderful. Loved it :)

[Butterflymom]

This is well done, well expressed, and I like the raw emotion expressed in this piece. Brillant, and creative!

[DanaRegen]

You just cant make someone like you, nicely said! Jerrycole, this is an amazing poem, keep up the good work! :)