Hope is not lost....

Hope is not lost....

A by jerrrycole
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This one was written when a girl I was with threatened to leave me because I didn't take her to the movies. xD

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 How can I look you in the eye
And tell you that I've changed?
When I never knew
Who I was to start with?
I am but a man
With which can not be measured
The lengths of emptiness
And sordidly crossed feelings
Of torment and I am lost
In love for you
All I ever wanted
Was you

© 2009 jerrrycole


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She threatened to leave you cause she wouldn't take you to the movies? Woooow...

Ok, sorry, that just caught me off gaurd, lol. For the writing, it was wondeful, and to base something so small, like her threatening to leave you for something so small, is amazing. wonderful, wonderful, wonderful... Keep writing... I'm gonna keep reading :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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She threatened to leave you cause she wouldn't take you to the movies? Woooow...

Ok, sorry, that just caught me off gaurd, lol. For the writing, it was wondeful, and to base something so small, like her threatening to leave you for something so small, is amazing. wonderful, wonderful, wonderful... Keep writing... I'm gonna keep reading :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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About
I'm da weiner. Plain and simple. Yep. more..

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A Poem by jerrrycole