15Acht

15Acht

A by jerrrycole
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This one goes out to the Reeds. xD

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How can you justify holding us back?
Ripping away the very air we breathe
You've threatened to end us in the worst way
You're killing off all our hope
And taking with it our every lost dream
Honor has died, you've killed it
One day I'll return the favor
One day I'll right your wrongs
One day we'll stand up and take you down
Force will become farce and only hope will remain
A hope that we can all preserve
No one will hold back their hearts
No one will take back their actions
Everyone will see the light
Everyone will be free.

© 2009 jerrrycole


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Kat
In some way it reminded me of one of my teachers that seemed like they didn't even really care about us.
Nice work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


eh... I wouldn't say its your best one, but I still loved reading it :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 22, 2009

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jerrrycole
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