15Funf

15Funf

A by jerrrycole
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Yep.

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 Brother why have you forsaken me?
Taken away my everything
Corrupted my innocence
With no conscience and no heart
Can one even be considered alive?
Or have I died
Like the countless souls laid to rest
By my own two hands?
You've made a monster out of me
Brother, I am a monster
Insatiable bloodlust is all I feel
The soft sound of the fallen is all I dream
Brother, why have you forsaken me?
I would have stood by you
Until the gates of Hell.

© 2009 jerrrycole


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Yep. What you said. Yep.

Your writing is unbelievable. It's so... intimadating, so free, so... i don't know... You just write, and what you write is... indescribable. I loved it, like always.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on February 22, 2009

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jerrrycole
jerrrycole

In the car., IN



About
I'm da weiner. Plain and simple. Yep. more..

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Uhm. Uhm.

A Poem by jerrrycole