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This is probably my favorite that I've ever written.

No one can match your heart
Radiating incarcerating beauty
Holding us in, cathcing our breath
No one will ever take away my love
With you, I can dominate worlds
Without you, not even myself
For you, I would destroy both
And while i sit here in captivity
I’ll create new levels of love
Only to fall into them with you
Without you, I can not be
Without you, I will not be
I love you, always and forever
For I am Eternity
And you are my golden dawn

Reviews

[ShadowHaze]

My favorite out of all the ones you've written... so far :) It's so beautiful and sweet, simple and loving. So sweet it makes me wanna cry. I love it, and I agree with Lise: whoever you wrote this for, was very very lucky.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

I am captivated by the simplicity yet it says it all in once sweet sweep. Yes keep writing.. lots more like this the world needs it!!! You are great on all spectrums.. the person you wrote this for is very lucky indeed!!!

[Miss Blue Skies]

That was beautiful...
I was sitting here, looking for new writers...and what do ya know?

You're good.
Keep writing