Shilly-shally

Speak your heart.

sometimes i'm good,

sometimes i'm not

there are times i want to make it stop

but this hesitating heart can't adapt

 

i used to laugh at my mistake

and let the day just fade away

in every chance i let to pass

my feeling is in captious

 

and now that she was owned by someone else

my vague mind is in rage

the calm weather changed

as the cold wind abstained

 

then i said to GOD that its unfair,

that HE let my heart fell-in-love with her.

Author's Note

never waste your time.

Reviews

[Legendary_Princess]

Ok very good poem, I liked it, but you need the correct punctuation. Then before every sentace make your word capitalize. Other than very good poem because people can relate to it.

[Aubrai]

Nothing's fair in this world, because we want it to be in favor of us. Always.

The format was good, just use correct punctuation. It's a good poem, overall. When it comes from the heart and many people can relate, it's always a good poem.

[WyndnWatr]

It is clear that this comes from the heart. Spurned or faded love is always a heartbreak. Very good word captious. Keep writing, your heart doesn't end here.