babies are preshuse !!!

another one of my poems ... its a great feeling to be a mom wonderful and its a gift from god

Babies are preshuse ,

　

　

Babies are the most wonderful thing to have,

You hold them ,

Feed them ,

watch over them ,

take care of them ,

Play with them ,

Keep an eye out for babies,

Hold them when they cry ,

To have that feeling of a mother ,

It is so lovely and wonderful ,

When their in your tummy ,

You get to feel them kicking ,

What a wonderful joy,

Babies are gifts from god ,

　

The End ,

　

Author's Note

another one of my poems if your going to be rude please do not leave a commet if your going to be nice then go ahead ... tell me what you think

Reviews

[Captain]

Very cute.
'Captain

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I have a 2 months old niece now and she is sooo cute and adorable,
love her to bits :D

[olla]

yes.. they are..

[Heromen Selena]

Babies are a grace from the heavens. Although they can be a pain sometimes ;). Really Good.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Babies are indeed gifts from God.
They are precious :)
Great job!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Angelic Surrender]

Emensly true. I love it, and babies :)

[?]

I agree babies are precious...nicely done

[Pencrafter]

Amen! If this poem reflects your own attitude and feelings, you must be the world's greatest mom. I love the way you start with a basic statement, then list different joys, duties and activities, and finish with a profound fact of life. You could probably eliminate the commas at the end of each line. Either way, it's one of your best pieces, I think.

[Sleeping Maiden]

yes, babies are precious all right. =) They are a gift. This was beautiful.
Wonderful work!

[R J Askew]

I have three of my own. Sometimes it is easy to forget they were babies once, but your poem reminds me. Men intellectualise life. Women, mothers of life, feel it kicking inside them. You capture the beauty of it simply and beautifully. Well done!