A fool said,

well just a religouse poem ,...

Religuse poem /

A fool said,

BY:Jennifer Little ,

　

　

The fool hath said......

The fool hath said.......

We who deemed his wise ,

We who believed,

Thou wast dead,

How we seek thine eyes?

Grant us the single heart ,

Once more,

No sacred things,

The sword of truth our fathers wore,

Lord,

teach us how to pray,

When Thou wast Lord and kings,

For while our souls in darkness dwell,

Make a choice ,

Heaven , or Hell,

The End,

Author's Note

tell me what you think reviews please

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Hmm interesting..

i like it..

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice message. I like

[khalid]

excellent poem,,,,,all people need to have strong faith

[Mockingbird]

brings to mind someone who is lost...and needs to be rescued from this road to nowhere she was going to. we;ve strayed so far from our faith we feel alienated and lost. we can help ourselves on our own. excellent poem.

[Marie]

Learn how to spell "religious" before you write about it.

[MandaBear]

I love it. i loved the rhyming :)

[AK]

Beautiful poem! I love the use of archaic English...

[Chris]

Religion is a very personal issue... you spoke respectfully.