A fool said,

well just a religouse poem ,...

Religuse poem /

A fool said,

BY:Jennifer Little ,

　

　

The fool hath said......

The fool hath said.......

We who deemed his wise ,

We who believed,

Thou wast dead,

How we seek thine eyes?

Grant us the single heart ,

Once more,

No sacred things,

The sword of truth our fathers wore,

Lord,

teach us how to pray,

When Thou wast Lord and kings,

For while our souls in darkness dwell,

Make a choice ,

Heaven , or Hell,

The End,

Author's Note

tell me what you think reviews please

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like it but not my favorite.

[Maria.F.T]

so amazing with the words

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Good job....

[Geraldine]

Great write. ^^

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i like the straightforwardness of the last few lines

[Starcaller]

Very interesting.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe we have two choices also. The good road or the bad. I believe the God of choice will ask what good did you do in your life? If you did nothing. Could be a bad ending? I believe being kind and trying to help a few people will lead you to a good place. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Pencrafter]

It's a nice poem, reflecting on the choices we all face and our ultimate responsibility. Personally, I think I would like the poem more if you didn't use archaic King James-type language. But, some people do like 'thees' and 'thous', perhaps thinking this is more 'religious' language. True spirituality does not depend on any particular language or word choices. What counts is what's in our heart, our attitude and viewpoint. It's a nice poem.

[Captain]

This one is probably my favorite so far. Much smoother to read than some of the others.
'Captain

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this :)
Great job.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)