Baby feeling!!!

Well it's basically saying and asking questions in this poem about is it true could i be pregnate

Baby Feeling ,

By: Jennifer Little.

　

I feel you moving,

I can feel you kicking,

I think it’s muscle spasms,

Took a pregnancy test ,

Negative,

But have all the symptoms,

Is it true ,

Can i be pregnate and not know,

Moving,

Kicking feeling,

Hot flashes,

Feeling sick ,

Head aches ,

OMG,

Is it true,

Can it be,

Well guess i’ll find out pretty soon.

The End,

Author's Note

well just another one of my poems didnt know what i should put it under so you tell me .....

Reviews

[Morrigan Nicole]

i agree with the rest, very good. though, i admit, i find you putting "the end" at the end of all your work a little irritating. especially when you end it nicely then the little "the end" sets it all out of sorts.
other than that, you did a great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Miss a few periods then you will know you are with baby. I hope you get the news you desire. Good if you are ready and prepare for a child. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Pencrafter]

Because I'm a guy I must admit a lack in understanding how a pregnancy must feel. Your poem helps me appreciate a little of what it must be like. You might try using question mark punctuation on such lines as, "Is it true". These are great questions. I especially like the last line which makes the plain-truth statement of fact; a woman WILL find out for sure. Nice job.

[Captain]

You can get a false negitive back on a pregnancy test. Try again in a couple of weeks.
'Captain

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Those rollercoaster feelings ladies get...nice :D

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You did a great job describing the feelings you have when you think you're pregnant.
Great job altogether :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Angelic Surrender]

I like it :)

[khalid]

why always writing the end at the end of every poem? sometimes i think it is part of the poem lol. nice work

[Marie]

It's possible to be falsely pregnate...

[Chris]

A lot of heart within your words...

[MandaBear]

Wow very interesting. Keep up the good work :)