Dooms day in Reading High School part seven!

well this is part seven to the first one so hope you enjoy it and have fun reading it ....

Dooms day in Reading High School part seven!

Now we know in the last storie that the vampires, and the zombies were taking over the dinosaur world, and the Queen vampire smelt the humans and demanded the other vampires to find them. She forced them all to find the humans before the zombies could find or smell the humans.

And if the vampires would not listen to the Queen she would through the ones who wouldn't follow her rules to go to the Zombies and be vanished from her site and to be torn apart by the biggest Zombie Dinosaur. None of the vampires wanted that to happen so they listened to the Queen.

All the Cave women and Cavemen were scared and didn't have any place to hide at all. On like most students they were smarter. They new one thing that the others didn't. The smarter Cave women and Cavemen would dig tunnels in their caves to escape and hid away if something bad ever happened, Because the thing with these Vampires was that they wasn't allowed to go under ground. They were afraid of it. They didn't like the darkness. So when it turns to night they would fly off and try to find a place that had light so they wouldn't die. But there were Cave women, and Cavemen who didn't know that it was alright to go outside in the day time. So bam right there 25 people died automatically. The Vampires got them right away swooped them up and turned them into vampires after ripping their guts out.

There were only 100 smart Cave women and Cavemen. So that meant that there were 50 girls . And 50 guys. “But,” the other 75 were stupid and didn't know what to do and that's why there were only 50 of them left of the dum ones. See now the 100 Cavemen and Cave women were going to stay safe because they dig deep, deep wholes to where the Vampires couldn't go into. So these Cave women and Cavemen would never die unless the Zombies found them.

The End,

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

well hope you enjoy this story because im working on part eigth now ..... so have fun reading this let me know what you think and give me some review please

Reviews

[Geraldine]

Wow. Really interesting piece and I also admired your wide imagination. ^^

[Who Cares]

Nice job, you have a nice imagination. Thanks for sharing this with me

[Pencrafter]

Well, I enjoy your imagination and the freedom you feel in writing. Please accept a little counsel. Slowly proofread for errors or have a friend do so. Reading a story is like walking along a path. But if there are errors in writing it's like tripping on rocks or potholes. It detracts from the story.
Keep that imagination flowing!

[AK]

Very nice!

[T. Michele Smock]

ok

[quarintine_deathangel]

Keep an eye on homophone spelling differences, although rather than that, the story is childish and truly different, very nice chapter.

[eatmills]

It was actually quite amusing. I really enjoyed this style of writing. So abstract and surreal that I wanted to read more of this story.

[Secret Valentine]

Good job. i like this!

[MandaBear]

good jod thank for sharing with with me :P

[Marie]

I think these must be mutated vampires, because the usual kind of vampire craves the darkness and hides from the light.