If i had done my home work last night!!!!

well just another kids poem hope you like it

IF I had done my home work last night !!!!

“If I had done my home work last night.”

I would of got an A plus,

“If I had done my home work last night.”

I wouldn't of gotten yelled at by my teacher,

“If I would of done my home work last night,”

Maybe I wouldn't of got grounded By my parents.

“If I would of done my home work last night.”

I wouldn't of gotten yelled at by my mom, and dad.

 

And i wouldn't be being punished .

THE END,

BY:Jennifer Little

Author's Note

just another funny kids poem let me know what you think review s please

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A true write when it comes to homework for some students.

[Starcaller]

lol, happens all the time XD

[Silver_Anime]

yep. i can relate to this right now with the homework that i have during the school year haha xD
great poem ^_^

[CrimsonBlaze]

And of course the rebels keep doing the wrong. And I could sooo relate to this one

[Tomislav Petricevic]

This is so true, I believe all kids can relate to this one.

[Popble]

And yet they continue skipping homework. . .

[Susanna F]

Cute! The only thing you may want to fix is the use of "of." The phrase is "I would have..." But very good job with a good message to kids!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

If only I would have remembered this as a kid.....

[Careless Whispers ._.]

that honestly has never happened to me..i always do my work and get straight A's or B's...anyway, i like it, keep writing like this and u will go far

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Even though I'm 27...my folks still yell at me....for different reasons but hehe...
very adoarable poem xD